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PB
04-26-2001, 08:42 PM
Kol... you ever thought of being a writer?

you should, I would surely buy your books.

Who all agrees with me here?


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Rabble Rouser
04-26-2001, 09:23 PM
I agree. He's so intelligent...I feel like a moron when I talk to him. That's why I'm taking bits of his brain. http://www.thehypertribe.net/ubb/biggrin.gif

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gone~away
04-28-2001, 07:09 AM
i respect koliedrus a great deal...

i would read a piece of literature he spawned

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Mordecai
04-28-2001, 09:11 AM
Yeah and at the worst you'd have some more toilet tissue.

-m


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Is that all?

Koliedrus
04-28-2001, 11:16 AM
Now that I'm done blushing...

Yes. In fact, I have thought about it. In one sense, I already am. It gives me great pleasure to offer up my thought to you for free. Bitch, you've paid me by submitting this thread.

I used to tell stories about my dreams. Sometimes I still do.

Several years ago, a friend of mine encouraged me to write a particular dream down. He mentioned grand ideas of making movies from the thoughts that came to me in my sleep.

I began with:

"Within their dominion, there is substance."

Before long, I had written page after page of prose trying to accurately describe how the multitude of fictional characters fit into the dream. Most of it was done in longhand. Some was written with a thermos of coffee close by while I ignored the computer screen and let my mind guide my fingers (like now).

The ending was never written although I know it well. Here's why:

Some criticism is expected whenever a piece is shown to someone. An old friend (20 years my senior and quite literate) tore my attempt to shreds. My motivation waned and I stopped writing so that I could attempt to fix the intricate and mundane errors of my work.

After months of neglect, I decided to submit it to a professor I met on IRC to cheer her up. I thought my friend's criticism was harsh!

I quit. Simple as that. Mrs. Kol encourages me to bring it back to the surface but she is on the other side of my eyes, just as you are. I'm not even sure if I could find it again.

That piece seems to have been written by another person now. I wonder if I can make that dream reality with your help...

Again, I thank you. I don't want your money. It's worthless here *points to his head*.



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PB
04-28-2001, 02:08 PM
Well Kol... what my opinion in the situation of the one you already began to write. Start from a different angle than the friends. Those that know you generally are the ones that are most critical for several reasons. One just because they think they are helping , 2 they think if they help in someway and you get published or something they will have had a part in it. It is only human nature to think that way. I understand because I write a great deal of poetry, i have the mind to write works of literature but not enough time, nor patience. But with my poetry I found that My friends or anyone I know is always more critical of it. It's either too lovery-dovey or too depressive and i should see my shrink, lmfao! So I finally submitted it to a publishing association, and just a few days ago received word that it is being published. So if I can do it , I know that you can, as your talent exceeds my own. So my best advice here is don't give up! I don't know you on a personal basis but i do believe that just by the stories i have read thus far... one day I will pick up a novel with you signature on the front page. http://www.thehypertribe.net/ubb/smile.gif So find that story, or write another one, send it to a publicist don't tell anyone about it, that way if you don't get it passed by that one, there is no disappointment from anyone other than yourself ( that way it doesn't discourage you) and then when they come along and say that you have been published it is a suprise to everyone else. Good luck!

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Koliedrus
04-28-2001, 02:19 PM
And so, Koliedrus was motivated to realize his dreams.

Thank you, Bitch. You're definitely a member of the Rescue Squad http://www.thehypertribe.net/ubb/smile.gif

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PB
04-28-2001, 02:58 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><HR>Originally posted by Koliedrus:
And so, Koliedrus was motivated to realize his dreams.

Thank you, Bitch. You're definitely a member of the Rescue Squad http://www.thehypertribe.net/ubb/smile.gif

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No thanks needed... that's what friends are for right? Ya know.. all my life I hated being called Bitch... funny how I enjoy it here/ Dreams become reality only if you make them so Kol... so it's up to y ou, only you can make or break the talent that is so evident!



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Why do we love the one that hurts us? And hurt the one that loves us?

Koliedrus
04-29-2001, 01:52 PM
I slept. I had another dream. It began with a flash in the sky and ended with a drop of water hitting a pool of dust.

Heh! I think I can fill in the gaps! DAMN! I've missed doing this!

You'll find the rest in my Shorts eventually (I hope).

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