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PB
04-12-2001, 07:42 PM
Fading Out

The darkness sets in,
Massive confusion fills my head,
Subtle thoughts of sin,
The overwhelming desire to be dead.

Am I coming or going?,
The answer I do not know,
The fear is constantly growing,
Insanity is sure to show.

A thought within begins to rise,
Some small moment of hope,
So much pain from these lies,
Holding it in trying to cope.

Is there some type of saving grace,
A way to end all the pain,
Tears and blood run down my face,
Only myself I have slain.

Will I awake this terrible dream,
Wondering what life is about,
What does it all mean?,
As I cry and begin to fade out
SexKitten
04-14-2001, 05:27 AM
wow, that was really great. Do you have more?

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Bite my lip and close my eyes, take my away to paradise
PB
04-14-2001, 05:08 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><HR>Originally posted by SexKitten:
wow, that was really great. Do you have more?

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Actually yes i do but most of them aren't dark... want some of the others let me know.. i'll email them to you.... Glad you liked this one though.. i was rather proud of it.
SexKitten
04-15-2001, 02:10 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE><HR>Originally posted by Psychotic _ Bitch:
<BLOCKQUOTE><HR>Originally posted by SexKitten:
wow, that was really great. Do you have more?

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Actually yes i do but most of them aren't dark... want some of the others let me know.. i'll email them to you.... Glad you liked this one though.. i was rather proud of it. [/quote]

I'd like that. I'll PM you with my address



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Bite my lip and close my eyes, take me away to paradise
AcidzCraze
05-14-2001, 05:14 AM
I enjoyed that very much. Very good! >=)

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"Reality is that which when you stop believing it, it doesn't go away" -Philip K. Dick
PB
05-18-2001, 03:41 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><HR>Originally posted by AcidzCraze:
I enjoyed that very much. Very good! >=)

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Thank you!



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Why do we love the one that hurts us? And hurt the one that loves us?