mute
05-10-2001, 02:32 AM
here it goes.. the plot of my fantasy...
i'm debating whether this be a story of this world, or a parallel world to this one...
not too far down the road all man kind seems to be coming to an end... our problems today are far worse down the road... a city grows and we all flock to the new city "requesting names", most of us anyways... the place where this city would be is U.S./Canada.. like all along the east coast, i'm thinking this one up
now when i say a city, i mean a huge city... like 100 times the size of NEw York city, or even bigger... and most of man-kind resides there..
the man responsible for this movement is "requesting names" ... he wears a suit of high-technology, and has the power of "molecular manipulation"(i don't know if that's the correct phrase).. or "magic"... creating anything from his mind... he is a mystery for now, along with the origin of his power.. he also has science buddies and such.. but i'll tell you all of the characters in another thread...
a new school is also created, for the "gifted" minds... ones who can use greater "brain power"... it breeds a new line of "peace keepers"... or to make it more simple for y'as, Jedi's...
the city which was suppose to increase peace doesn't, it's even worse than today's society, with all the cultures and religions still battling.. one big new york city....
a story now begins, about the new breed of warriors, the mystery creator, and they're friends, mentors and loved ones...
the story is 2 parts.. or 2 movies.. a name i've thought up for it is..
The Alpha, and the Omega...
i'd use that because it's more original, but i think this story is comeplete originality, because i've taken things from other stories, and put them together with my original stuff....
any comments, i still don't think i've explained it good enough.. i think when you people read this you'll think it sounds cheesy, but if it came from the real depths of it, it would be k3wl..
comments?
ps. should i put these topics in Liquid Seperation? i'm planning on drawing the characters and stuff... this is a little project of mine...
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i'm debating whether this be a story of this world, or a parallel world to this one...
not too far down the road all man kind seems to be coming to an end... our problems today are far worse down the road... a city grows and we all flock to the new city "requesting names", most of us anyways... the place where this city would be is U.S./Canada.. like all along the east coast, i'm thinking this one up
now when i say a city, i mean a huge city... like 100 times the size of NEw York city, or even bigger... and most of man-kind resides there..
the man responsible for this movement is "requesting names" ... he wears a suit of high-technology, and has the power of "molecular manipulation"(i don't know if that's the correct phrase).. or "magic"... creating anything from his mind... he is a mystery for now, along with the origin of his power.. he also has science buddies and such.. but i'll tell you all of the characters in another thread...
a new school is also created, for the "gifted" minds... ones who can use greater "brain power"... it breeds a new line of "peace keepers"... or to make it more simple for y'as, Jedi's...
the city which was suppose to increase peace doesn't, it's even worse than today's society, with all the cultures and religions still battling.. one big new york city....
a story now begins, about the new breed of warriors, the mystery creator, and they're friends, mentors and loved ones...
the story is 2 parts.. or 2 movies.. a name i've thought up for it is..
The Alpha, and the Omega...
i'd use that because it's more original, but i think this story is comeplete originality, because i've taken things from other stories, and put them together with my original stuff....
any comments, i still don't think i've explained it good enough.. i think when you people read this you'll think it sounds cheesy, but if it came from the real depths of it, it would be k3wl..
comments?
ps. should i put these topics in Liquid Seperation? i'm planning on drawing the characters and stuff... this is a little project of mine...
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