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[Kayla]

i see him stagnant in the distance, kneeling in the softened sand through which my toes are sinking
Water slowly escapes from its immense prison only to conceive a pathway that leads me straight to him.
My mind begins to dream a fantasy,
as the moonlight unveils his manifest elegance
I fall to my knees I am frozen.
With one step I am lost, with a single movement I am vanquished,yet I choose to linger on...
A beauty this exquisite, a heart this pure, a character this complete,takes my breath away...
I reach forth my arms, outstretched in humility to give myself to him completly...
I stumble forward touching the moistened earth with every stride,perceiving a once thought fantasy become reality.
In that moment I recognize innocence
I long to hold him close, to breathe his breath he is the simplicity most travelers seek the man all women desire and the supremacy only queens deserve...I wish to kneel beside him, close my eyes... and welcome eternity


i wrote that for my poetry class last year. I won 1st place with it http://www.thehypertribe.net/ubb/smile.gif



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[Koliedrus]

I need to stop in here more often!

I'm impressed!

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[Kayla]

thanks. Im going to continue posting my poetry in here. It feels good to know that people are actually reading it. http://www.thehypertribe.net/ubb/smile.gif

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